Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
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Kukas vetää moisen käännöksen ihan lonkalta?
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Itkisitkö onnesta
Jos panisin sua kunnolla
Kun väität etten uskalla
Enää ajaa silmät ummessa
Kovin helposti ei kiinni saa
Sitä kadonnutta nuoruutta
Ja mieletöntä fiilistä
Kun on ensikertaa kännissä
No ehkä elämässä tarvitsee
Joskus selitellä itselleen
Ja eritellä mielessään
Miksi kuviot on pielessään
Kun sitä tuskin edes
Voi aavistaa unissaan
Kuka saa ja kenelle annetaan
Ja miten raukkamaisesti onnen anti täällä jaetaan
Se vituttaa ei saa
Sut vaikka kantapaikasta kannetaan
Ulos asti rauhoittumaan
Kun hakemalla syitä haetaan
Se luoti tuli oviaukosta
Ohiajavasta autosta
otti kitarasta kimmokkeen
Ja osui portsaria pohkeeseen
Ja vaikka alle varttitunnissa
Oli virkavalta paikalla
Ja koko kylä saatiin saarroksiin
Kun tekijätkin tiedettiin
Ei löydetty kuin
Pelkkä rämisevä peltisanko täynnä luodinreikiä
Ja bussipysäkiltä kylmissään sen tyttöystävä
Kassi kädessään
En tiedä yritinkö ollenkaan
Edes painaa jarrupoljinta
Vai unohdinko jarruttaa
Siinä sohjoisessa kaarteessa
Mä olen pahoillani kaikesta
Mua turha pahalla on muistella
Vastaantulijoiden kaistalla
On vittumaista luistella
Kun sitä tuskin edes
Voi aavistaa unissaan
Kuka saa ja kenelle annetaan
Ja miten raukkamaisesti onnen anti täällä jaetaan
Se vituttaa ei saa
Sut vaikka kantapaikasta kannetaan
Ulos asti rauhoittumaan
Kun hakemalla syitä haetaan
Mutta mitään älä tunnusta
Älä kerro edes vauvasta
Kukaan kuitenkaan ei ymmärrä
Mitä koettu on yhdessä
Minä kortin lupaan postittaa
jostain vähän kauempaa
Jos sitä perille en muuten saa
Sen tuuli sulle kuljettaa
Itkisitkö onnesta
Kukas vetää moisen käännöksen ihan lonkalta?
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Itkisitkö onnesta
Jos panisin sua kunnolla
Kun väität etten uskalla
Enää ajaa silmät ummessa
Kovin helposti ei kiinni saa
Sitä kadonnutta nuoruutta
Ja mieletöntä fiilistä
Kun on ensikertaa kännissä
No ehkä elämässä tarvitsee
Joskus selitellä itselleen
Ja eritellä mielessään
Miksi kuviot on pielessään
Kun sitä tuskin edes
Voi aavistaa unissaan
Kuka saa ja kenelle annetaan
Ja miten raukkamaisesti onnen anti täällä jaetaan
Se vituttaa ei saa
Sut vaikka kantapaikasta kannetaan
Ulos asti rauhoittumaan
Kun hakemalla syitä haetaan
Se luoti tuli oviaukosta
Ohiajavasta autosta
otti kitarasta kimmokkeen
Ja osui portsaria pohkeeseen
Ja vaikka alle varttitunnissa
Oli virkavalta paikalla
Ja koko kylä saatiin saarroksiin
Kun tekijätkin tiedettiin
Ei löydetty kuin
Pelkkä rämisevä peltisanko täynnä luodinreikiä
Ja bussipysäkiltä kylmissään sen tyttöystävä
Kassi kädessään
En tiedä yritinkö ollenkaan
Edes painaa jarrupoljinta
Vai unohdinko jarruttaa
Siinä sohjoisessa kaarteessa
Mä olen pahoillani kaikesta
Mua turha pahalla on muistella
Vastaantulijoiden kaistalla
On vittumaista luistella
Kun sitä tuskin edes
Voi aavistaa unissaan
Kuka saa ja kenelle annetaan
Ja miten raukkamaisesti onnen anti täällä jaetaan
Se vituttaa ei saa
Sut vaikka kantapaikasta kannetaan
Ulos asti rauhoittumaan
Kun hakemalla syitä haetaan
Mutta mitään älä tunnusta
Älä kerro edes vauvasta
Kukaan kuitenkaan ei ymmärrä
Mitä koettu on yhdessä
Minä kortin lupaan postittaa
jostain vähän kauempaa
Jos sitä perille en muuten saa
Sen tuuli sulle kuljettaa
Itkisitkö onnesta
Viimeksi muokannut masa, 12.12.2007 14:55. Yhteensä muokattu 2 kertaa.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Korjaus alkajaisiksi otsikkoon: If I fucked you etc.
Mun äiti osais varmaan kääntää ton aika helposti mut en taida viitsiä vaivata kun sillä on muutakin hommaa.
Mun äiti osais varmaan kääntää ton aika helposti mut en taida viitsiä vaivata kun sillä on muutakin hommaa.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
hups.. Se oli typoZeb kirjoitti:Korjaus alkajaisiksi otsikkoon: If I fucked you etc.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Juujuumasa kirjoitti:hups.. Se oli typoZeb kirjoitti:Korjaus alkajaisiksi otsikkoon: If I fucked you etc.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fuck You thoroughly?
Tässä olis lonkalta, ei rimmaa mutta englanniks se on vaikeaa
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Would you cry for feeling so happy
If I fucked you real good
When you say I don't dare anymore
to drive with my eyes closed
It's not easy to reach
the youth you lost
And the amazing feeling
of being drunk first time
Well, maybe what life requires
is explanations to yourself
And putting together the pieces
why things went so wrong
I can hardly anymore even
imagine in my dreams
who is getting and who is given
and how unfairly luck is shared in here
But you musn't be pissed off
When even in your regular joint
they throw you out
if you keep looking for reasons
The bullet came trough the open door
from a car passing by
ricochetted off my guitar
and hit the doorman in calf
In less than fifteen minutes
the cops came to scene
surrounded the whole village
to catch the shooters
And all they found
was a metal bucket shot full of holes
and shivering girlfriend on a bustop
with a bag in her hand
I don't know if even tried at all
to press the brake pedal
Or if I just forgot to slow down
in that snowy wet curve
I am sorry for it all
please don't think of me badly
Sliding down the wrong lane
is pretty fucked up feeling
I can hardly anymore even
imagine in my dreams
who is getting and who is given
and how unfairly luck is shared in here
But you musn't be pissed off
When even in your regular joint
they throw you out
if you keep looking for reasons
Don't ever confess anything
not even about the baby
Nobody will understand
what we went trough together
I promise to post a card
from somewhere further away
Shoud there be no other way
the wind will carry it to you
Would you cry for feeling so happy?
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Would you cry for feeling so happy
If I fucked you real good
When you say I don't dare anymore
to drive with my eyes closed
It's not easy to reach
the youth you lost
And the amazing feeling
of being drunk first time
Well, maybe what life requires
is explanations to yourself
And putting together the pieces
why things went so wrong
I can hardly anymore even
imagine in my dreams
who is getting and who is given
and how unfairly luck is shared in here
But you musn't be pissed off
When even in your regular joint
they throw you out
if you keep looking for reasons
The bullet came trough the open door
from a car passing by
ricochetted off my guitar
and hit the doorman in calf
In less than fifteen minutes
the cops came to scene
surrounded the whole village
to catch the shooters
And all they found
was a metal bucket shot full of holes
and shivering girlfriend on a bustop
with a bag in her hand
I don't know if even tried at all
to press the brake pedal
Or if I just forgot to slow down
in that snowy wet curve
I am sorry for it all
please don't think of me badly
Sliding down the wrong lane
is pretty fucked up feeling
I can hardly anymore even
imagine in my dreams
who is getting and who is given
and how unfairly luck is shared in here
But you musn't be pissed off
When even in your regular joint
they throw you out
if you keep looking for reasons
Don't ever confess anything
not even about the baby
Nobody will understand
what we went trough together
I promise to post a card
from somewhere further away
Shoud there be no other way
the wind will carry it to you
Would you cry for feeling so happy?
Viimeksi muokannut Tix, 12.12.2007 14:44. Yhteensä muokattu 1 kertaa.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fuck You thoroughly?
for the first time?Tix kirjoitti:...of being drunk first time...
Kohta kerrallaan tää lutviutuu
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
"Would You Cry From Joy, If I Fucked You Thoroughly"? Kettumainen on englannintaa jo koko otsikko. Ei tuo ehdotelmanikaan oikein kuulosta hyvältä, saati alkuperäinen ehdotus.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fuck You thoroughly?
Well, maybe what you need in life?Tix kirjoitti:Well, maybe what life needs...
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fuck You thoroughly?
Excellento! Loistavaa t-paita-tekstikamaaTix kirjoitti:Tässä olis lonkalta, ei rimmaa mutta englanniks se on vaikeaa
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Äänestän otsikon mukaan "Would you cry for happiness" Tai sitten out of happiness?Tix kirjoitti:Would you cry for feeling so happy
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fuck You thoroughly?
Minusta se ei kuullosta oikealta.Zeb kirjoitti:Äänestän otsikon mukaan "Would you cry for happiness" Tai sitten out of happiness?Tix kirjoitti:Would you cry for feeling so happy
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fuck You thoroughly?
itse asiassa korvasin sanalla "requires" .. sopii paremmin.Zeb kirjoitti:Well, maybe what you need in life?Tix kirjoitti:Well, maybe what life needs...
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Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Cry with joy?
Tasan ei mene muumit kanootissa.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Hyvä alku Tixiltä. Ehkä se tuosta muokkaantuu pikku hiljaa.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fuck You thoroughly?
Tää nyt kuulostaa muutenkin kummalta, mutta jos noin haluaa sanoa, niin ei ole is vaan are.Tix kirjoitti:...is explanations to yourself..
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fuck You thoroughly?
Kuulosta oikealta!!1Tix kirjoitti:Minusta se ei kuullosta oikealta.
Terv. Kielipoliisi
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Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
"Would you cry for happiness":lla on muualla kutsuttu ko. kappaletta.
Tasan ei mene muumit kanootissa.
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Mutta se on suoraan käännettynä "itkisitkö onnellisuuden vuoksi" ... ei oikeen kuullosta samalta kuin "itkisitkö onnesta."aasi kirjoitti:"Would you cry for happiness":lla on muualla kutsuttu ko. kappaletta.
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Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Would you cry tears of joy
if I fucked you real properly
as you claim I no longer dare
to drive with my eyes closed
It's not easy to reach for
your lost sense of youth
and the brainless feeling
of being wasted for the first time
Well maybe it's best
finding explanations at times
and making sense of why it is
your life became a mess
As you hardly even in your dreams
can anticipate the reasons
behind why one is given and another gets
and the cowardliness of luck's roulette
You shouldn't get pissed off
at the folks carrying you out from the joint
so as to allow you to cool down
making up accusations out of thin air
That bullet came throuh the door
from a car that was passing by
it bounced from the side of a guitar
and hit the doorman on his calf
And even though it only took a while
for the cops to arrive
and the whole village was surrounded
as they knew the villains' names
They found nothing but a bucket
shot full of holes
and his shivering girlfriend
waiting for a bus with a bag
I have no recollection
of whether I tried to hit the breaks
or if I just forgot about it
on that sod-covered curve
I'm sorry for it all
don't regard me badly
you know it's fucking horrible
sliding on the right side lane
You know that hardly even in your dreams
can you anticipate the reasons
behind why one is given and another gets
and the cowardliness of luck's roulette
You shouldn't get pissed off at
the folks carrying you out from the joint
so as to allow you to cool down
making up accusations out of thin air
Remember not to confess a thing
don't even mention about the baby
all the stuff we've been through
no one will understand you see
I promise to send you a card
from somewhere pretty far
in case it gets lost in the mail
winds will carry it the rest of the way
Would you cry tears of joy
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En tiedä alkuperäistä biisiä, joten en ole varma tulkitsinko lyriikan oikein, enkä voinut kontrolloida rytmityksen sopivuutta biisin melodiaan. Enkä jaksanut miettiä kovin paljon rimmauksiakaan jne., mutta kai tästä idean pitäisi tulla selväksi?
Edit: typo
if I fucked you real properly
as you claim I no longer dare
to drive with my eyes closed
It's not easy to reach for
your lost sense of youth
and the brainless feeling
of being wasted for the first time
Well maybe it's best
finding explanations at times
and making sense of why it is
your life became a mess
As you hardly even in your dreams
can anticipate the reasons
behind why one is given and another gets
and the cowardliness of luck's roulette
You shouldn't get pissed off
at the folks carrying you out from the joint
so as to allow you to cool down
making up accusations out of thin air
That bullet came throuh the door
from a car that was passing by
it bounced from the side of a guitar
and hit the doorman on his calf
And even though it only took a while
for the cops to arrive
and the whole village was surrounded
as they knew the villains' names
They found nothing but a bucket
shot full of holes
and his shivering girlfriend
waiting for a bus with a bag
I have no recollection
of whether I tried to hit the breaks
or if I just forgot about it
on that sod-covered curve
I'm sorry for it all
don't regard me badly
you know it's fucking horrible
sliding on the right side lane
You know that hardly even in your dreams
can you anticipate the reasons
behind why one is given and another gets
and the cowardliness of luck's roulette
You shouldn't get pissed off at
the folks carrying you out from the joint
so as to allow you to cool down
making up accusations out of thin air
Remember not to confess a thing
don't even mention about the baby
all the stuff we've been through
no one will understand you see
I promise to send you a card
from somewhere pretty far
in case it gets lost in the mail
winds will carry it the rest of the way
Would you cry tears of joy
*
En tiedä alkuperäistä biisiä, joten en ole varma tulkitsinko lyriikan oikein, enkä voinut kontrolloida rytmityksen sopivuutta biisin melodiaan. Enkä jaksanut miettiä kovin paljon rimmauksiakaan jne., mutta kai tästä idean pitäisi tulla selväksi?
Edit: typo
Viimeksi muokannut EveryWoman, 12.12.2007 15:22. Yhteensä muokattu 1 kertaa.
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Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
No jaahas, olisi pitänyt katsoa onko joku jo heittänyt version ennen tuon postaamista. Monen asian hoiteleminen yhtä aikaa vähentää motivaatiota tutkia ketjuja läpi ennen vastaamista. *selittelee*
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Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
EveryWoman kirjoitti:En tiedä alkuperäistä biisiä
Tasan ei mene muumit kanootissa.
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Niin, olen sivistymätön moukka.aasi kirjoitti:EveryWoman kirjoitti:En tiedä alkuperäistä biisiä
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Mutsi käänsi ystävällisesti pyynnöstä noin viidessä minuutissa kun sanoin ettei tarvii olla hyvä eikä rimmata. Tämmönen maili siis tuli häneltä äsken (jos nyt oikein copypascansin):
Would you cry of happiness
Would you cry of happiness
If I’d fuck you properly
As you claim that I dare not
Drive with my eyes closed
It’s not very easy to catch
The lost youth
And the mad feeling
When you’re pissed for the first time
I guess you got to
Sometimes explain to yourself
And to analyze to yourself
Why things don’t work
As you can hardly
Get a hunch even when asleep
Who gets and who’s given
And how unfairly happiness is dealt here
It mustn’t make you sick
Even though you’re thrown out of your own pub
To calm down outside
And when you’re blamed without reason
The bullet came through the door
From a car driving by
Triggered from the guitar
And hit the doorman in the calf
As though in a quarter of an hour
The police were on the spot
And the whole village was surrounded
As the actors were known
The only thing that was found
Was a rattling metal bucket full of bullet-holes
And his girlfriend freezing at the bus stop
With a bag in her hand
I don’t know if I tried at all
To press the brakes
Or did I forget to brake
In that slushy curve
I’m so sorry for everything
No use remembering me with grudge
On the oncomer’s side
It’s lousy to skate
As it’s hard to hunch even
When you’re in sleep
Who gets and who’s given
And how unfairly happiness is dealt here on earth
It mustn’t make you angry
Though you’re carried out of your own joint
To calm down outside
And when you’re blamed without reason
But don’t confess anything
Don’t even tell about the baby
Nobody’ll anyway understand
What we’ve been through together
I promise to mail you a post-card
From somewhere far away
If I can’t get it to you otherwise
The wind will bring it to you
Would you cry of happiness
Would you cry of happiness
Would you cry of happiness
If I’d fuck you properly
As you claim that I dare not
Drive with my eyes closed
It’s not very easy to catch
The lost youth
And the mad feeling
When you’re pissed for the first time
I guess you got to
Sometimes explain to yourself
And to analyze to yourself
Why things don’t work
As you can hardly
Get a hunch even when asleep
Who gets and who’s given
And how unfairly happiness is dealt here
It mustn’t make you sick
Even though you’re thrown out of your own pub
To calm down outside
And when you’re blamed without reason
The bullet came through the door
From a car driving by
Triggered from the guitar
And hit the doorman in the calf
As though in a quarter of an hour
The police were on the spot
And the whole village was surrounded
As the actors were known
The only thing that was found
Was a rattling metal bucket full of bullet-holes
And his girlfriend freezing at the bus stop
With a bag in her hand
I don’t know if I tried at all
To press the brakes
Or did I forget to brake
In that slushy curve
I’m so sorry for everything
No use remembering me with grudge
On the oncomer’s side
It’s lousy to skate
As it’s hard to hunch even
When you’re in sleep
Who gets and who’s given
And how unfairly happiness is dealt here on earth
It mustn’t make you angry
Though you’re carried out of your own joint
To calm down outside
And when you’re blamed without reason
But don’t confess anything
Don’t even tell about the baby
Nobody’ll anyway understand
What we’ve been through together
I promise to mail you a post-card
From somewhere far away
If I can’t get it to you otherwise
The wind will bring it to you
Would you cry of happiness
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Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Would you shed tears of joy,
If I fucked you thoroughly
When you say I don't dare anymore
to drive with my eyes closed
It is not so easy to reach
The youth that is fading away
And the amazing feeling
Of being drunk for the first time
Well, maybe what one has to do in life
Is to make excuses to one’s self
And to analyse in one’s mind
Why things have gone astray
When one can hardly even
Imagine in one’s dreams
Who gets some and who receives
And how cowardly the fruits of luck are distributed here
You must not get pissed off
Even if you’re thrown out
From your regular hangout
When they keep looking for reasons
The bullet came from the doorway
From a car passing by
Took a reflection from the guitar
And hit the doorman in the calf
And although in a quarter
The officials were at the scene
And the whole village was encircled
When they knew the offenders
They didn’t find more than
A rattling bucket full of bullet holes
And at the bus stop his girlfirend
shivering with a bag in her hand
I’m not sure if I even tried
To press the brake pedal
Or did I forgot to break
For the sludgy curve
I’m so sorry for everything
There’s no need to think badly of me
The lane of oncoming cars
Is a shitty place to slide to
When one can hardly even
Imagine in one’s dreams
Who gets some and who receives
And how cowardly the fruits of luck are distributed here
You must not get pissed off
Even if you’re thrown out
From your regular hangout
When they keep looking for reasons
But do not confess a thing
Don’t mention even the bay
No-one will understand anyway
What we have been through together
But I’ll promise to send you a card
From somewhere a bit further away
And if there is no other way
The wind will bring it to you
would you shed tears of joy
If I fucked you thoroughly
When you say I don't dare anymore
to drive with my eyes closed
It is not so easy to reach
The youth that is fading away
And the amazing feeling
Of being drunk for the first time
Well, maybe what one has to do in life
Is to make excuses to one’s self
And to analyse in one’s mind
Why things have gone astray
When one can hardly even
Imagine in one’s dreams
Who gets some and who receives
And how cowardly the fruits of luck are distributed here
You must not get pissed off
Even if you’re thrown out
From your regular hangout
When they keep looking for reasons
The bullet came from the doorway
From a car passing by
Took a reflection from the guitar
And hit the doorman in the calf
And although in a quarter
The officials were at the scene
And the whole village was encircled
When they knew the offenders
They didn’t find more than
A rattling bucket full of bullet holes
And at the bus stop his girlfirend
shivering with a bag in her hand
I’m not sure if I even tried
To press the brake pedal
Or did I forgot to break
For the sludgy curve
I’m so sorry for everything
There’s no need to think badly of me
The lane of oncoming cars
Is a shitty place to slide to
When one can hardly even
Imagine in one’s dreams
Who gets some and who receives
And how cowardly the fruits of luck are distributed here
You must not get pissed off
Even if you’re thrown out
From your regular hangout
When they keep looking for reasons
But do not confess a thing
Don’t mention even the bay
No-one will understand anyway
What we have been through together
But I’ll promise to send you a card
From somewhere a bit further away
And if there is no other way
The wind will bring it to you
would you shed tears of joy
Re: Would You Cry For happiness, If I Fucked You thoroughly?
Reflection on heijastus, ei kimmoke